--- gentoo-gsoc.orig.txt	2018-09-07 09:50:13.259919695 +0200
+++ gentoo-gsoc.proposed.txt	2018-09-07 12:14:40.478564270 +0200
@@ -1,10 +1,13 @@
-Congratulations to Gibix and JSteward for finishing and passing the Gentoo Google Summer of Code 2018.
+Gentoo would like to congratulate Gibix and JSteward for finishing and passing
+Google Summer of Code 2018 mentored through Gentoo's participation.
 
-Gibix contributed at the project full Rust support, aiming at improving Rust support in Gentoo.
+Gibix contributed to the project full Rust support, aiming at improving Rust support in Gentoo.
 
-JSteward contributed at making Android a full Gentoo GNU/Linux distribution managed by Portage.
+JSteward contributed to making a full Gentoo GNU/Linux distribution, managed
+by Portage, running on devices using the original Android-customized kernel.
 
 The final report of their project can be see respectively in the following links:
 
 Gibix [[Journey into gentoo eclass](https://gibix.github.io/gsoc/2018/08/11/journey-into-gentoo-eclass.html)]  [[GSoC timeline](https://gibix.github.io/gsoc/2018/08/12/gsoc-timeline.html)]  
-JSteward [[Final_report](https://jsteward.moe/gsoc-2018-final-report.html)]
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+JSteward [[Final_report](https://jsteward.moe/gsoc-2018-final-report.html)]
+